Verse 3:  Unrequited

Verse 3: Unrequited

A Chapter by Glen Yumang Manese



Unrequited 

 

Written of a girl, watched her blossom in my book.

Immortalize a woman in verse, develops platonic picture.

Can a vein of unrequited love measure, but one heart.




© 2016 Glen Yumang Manese



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Good questions came to life in the chapter. Your description and question left the reader with something to ponder. I like the strength in your use of the language. One heart. Each heart built on quicksand held up by the few words of kindness. A very good chapter.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Thx for the review...C...



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It is in a platonic way that one can impartially measure a friend's true qualities and worth. The girl is your creation, inspired by as such and she takes on all the perfection in your pages to be immortalized in verse. Beautifully written....

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

D --- thanks for the feedback...
Just fantastic in a few lines, you describe the elusiveness of love, and the platonic strength... of admire a person, without touch... enjoyed this one.

- Elisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

I did have this divided a bit more in its original format...but as I went along --- in the making of.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

I forgot--- thanks again...
Good questions came to life in the chapter. Your description and question left the reader with something to ponder. I like the strength in your use of the language. One heart. Each heart built on quicksand held up by the few words of kindness. A very good chapter.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Thx for the review...C...
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Pax
it is like immortalizing the one memory you've once cherished. The first unrequited love just bound to be that way in one stroke of a pen, forever be in the pages of your library. short but very well verse mr. Glen, its great!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Their all different woman by the way...Pax...thanks for the read...short rather tells hidden meaning.. read more
Pax

3 Years Ago

yes it is indeed... a great concept, i like it, and you are most welcome!
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Ditto...I'm just now able to get online...Philippines has no electricity and water...I'm in Laguna -.. read more
Oh I quite like this one, sometimes a broken heart affects how we deal with future developments of the heart.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Well received and transferred --- FP...thanks again...slept in a bit...long week...
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You're welcome Glen, sleeping is a very good thang.....
This kind of makes one think, not sure your view when writing this but I imagine a man who sees a young woman bloom into her womanhood, but maybe she isnt in love with him?

Posted 3 Years Ago


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 VelvetRosetta

3 Years Ago

Very creative!
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Now...if I can just finish the second part...
 VelvetRosetta

3 Years Ago

Lol, I am sure you will make it happen.
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FEA
I am still trying to wrap my mind on this 1

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Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Well --- good chatting here with you...off to explore a bit...a new writer...requested a friendship .. read more
FEA

3 Years Ago

Thanks u2:))))))))))))))))))
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

any time...drop by from time to time...revamping all my writings here...so if they are closed and po.. read more
You captured the beauty of writer's muse that he uses as inspiration. Going into my faves!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Again -- thanks for your time and review...glad you liked it and put this one on your shelf...

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Me in a nutshell: I am currently, done with my first book of verses: The Onyx - Vena Amoris. Friesen Press finished in December and is out for release before the holidays at the end of the year 20.. more..

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