Verse 8:  Balance

Verse 8: Balance

A Chapter by Glen Yumang Manese



Balance

 

Sleep hinders my senses to focus.

Deprives are thoughts that linger.

Unbalance is the Richter scale.

Only leaves a temporary relief of justice.

Prevail in the long term to submit.

Fighting to stay alive keeps an advantage.

Unnerving is a quest to control the action.

Rushes are a tick and tock of Big Ben clock.

Blurs vision slowly closes eyelids.

Call-out a distant dream to perception.

Come with me, Muse tells you silently.

There is tomorrow, bid farewell today.




© 2016 Glen Yumang Manese



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thank you for your kind review and
comments you left on my page and for
this lovely write.


I loved these lost stanza's lines here.


Blurs vision slowly closes eyelids.

Call-out a distant dream to perception.

Come with me, Muse tells you silently.

There is tomorrow, bid farewell today.



Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

KP --- thanks --- this was a redo --- I did not like the first draft and gave it a more define polis.. read more
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

Ah ok we are or own worst Critics so that is understandable :) It's a pleasure my friend. you're ve.. read more



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thank you for your kind review and
comments you left on my page and for
this lovely write.


I loved these lost stanza's lines here.


Blurs vision slowly closes eyelids.

Call-out a distant dream to perception.

Come with me, Muse tells you silently.

There is tomorrow, bid farewell today.



Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

KP --- thanks --- this was a redo --- I did not like the first draft and gave it a more define polis.. read more
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

Ah ok we are or own worst Critics so that is understandable :) It's a pleasure my friend. you're ve.. read more
Truly enjoyed your write - I love the last line - there is tomorrow, bid farewell today

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Yes...at times things are better left in place..thanks again...
So cool,now that's something else...Good job man...:).
You show clear,that the "Balance" is somekind the "perversion",of the Universe.
Smooth and nice. ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Glad you got something out of this one...thanks for your time and review...--- Cal1

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