Verse 10: Building Block

Building Block

 

Dislike hollow sound of silence.

Who am I to base an opinion or fact? 

Words are nothing now.

Try to escape boredom of time.

Looking at shattered pieces makes a picture. 

Blur meaning is far over a translation.

Dampers a building block to necessity.

Length will crack the span at center point.

Do you feel a burden from the mass weight?

Do me a favor by lending out your hand.

Do I compound the situation so opinionated?

Curvature will rise to prove a basic fact.

Silence says nothing, but offers more.

Spoken many answers will follow.

Keystone held not by just one palm.

Endures is a relationship between two.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Thank you for your lovely review and
comments you left on my page and for this
wonderful piece you shared.


Try to escape boredom of time.

Looking at shattered pieces makes a picture.

Blur meaning is far over a translation.

Dampers a building block to necessity.

Length will crack the span at center point.

Do you feel a burden from the mass weight?

Do me a favor by lending out your hand.

I loved these stanza's lines.



Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Thanks for the review and your time...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. was a pleasure to read. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Benita --- if you get a chance ---take a look at "Atomic Number 82 Series" its a bit longer of a narrative but set in a theme of 7 of 7 lyrical verses...you have to start from the beginning to the end to understand the impact of the read...its the newest addition to my work...good day...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I will put it in my general reading and check it out later sure.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

thanks again...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

could you send a link to the page for me that would help thanks