WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
she's all right

she's all right

A Poem by Laminators Dubai

Perceive herself? Identify?
just another wet soul, now dried
nobody's here to feel the pain
she need to cry some more, with saline

she fall outside of the boundaries
underlying spectrum of unknown name
she failed to feel, she realize
lived the best lies, living but disguised

pain is the best way to keep herself afflicted
it’s a lot better than that screaming voice inside
just a little blood, she's 'all right''
coarse her mind behave, she can't decide
 
love to hate herself,
 she loved everyone who ever criticized
they keep her 'in control'', down through the core
trick herself to stay occupied.

 

 

 


© 2013 Laminators Dubai



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well writen poem , dark message behind the line. possesive and force eliminate the human willingness

Posted 3 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

3 Years Ago

totally.
I actually feel like new me after reading my writings. This one always make me th.. read more
A very powerful poem. You create a bad place where we accept less and it is okay. The strong statements create sad visions and the emotion of little hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


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ron
Painful yet beautiful write glitch. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

3 Years Ago

I do feel that's one of my best too. thank you so much ron :)
ron

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome glitch :)
Its beautiful yet creatively written. Well done there!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I can feel the pain Glitch....Very well crafted lines....

Posted 3 Years Ago


You wrote with a lot of depth here Glitch :) Depth is within I see all that dear friend:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


I loved this poem friend! :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Nice work, glitch - this strikes close to home. The final stanza certainly nails it. Nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ahhh, think about the multitude who can relate to this! Universal theme. Very well-written, Glitch! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2013
Last Updated on December 27, 2013
Tags: self harming, sad, hatred

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Laminators Dubai
Laminators Dubai

United Arab Emirates



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