realized

realized

A Poem by Laminators Dubai

I just did it.
Did it again, after a long time.
I just rammed an antique blade in my ankle,
when it touched the bone I realized...


they were right!

I'm dead.


© 2013 Laminators Dubai



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Appreciate the juxtaposition between tone and subject matter.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is very profound. With my experience with depression, I can identify a lot with this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I didn't like the poem or that imagery....you need some discipline hun??

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


it would be pretty stupid to hurt yourself with a blade, you have to be carefull. I suppose then you are talking about an analouge :D If that's so, then I think we usually play with very dangerous situations, knowing the risks, and we get hurt.
The best part of it, "we're then dead"
How can be dead and keep living? It's just another way of saying "I'm screwed"
I liked it a lot, and I thing It doesn't needs to be longer. It is just perfect the way it is. CONGRATS!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Many ways to know if you are alive or dead? A blade to a ankle would tell you the truth. A interesting poem. I wanted to read more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like this one. It's perfect. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


ohhhhhh I like it, it brings so many images to mind and so many possibilities. Brilliant.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

3 Years Ago

thankyou !! and HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
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magenta24uk

3 Years Ago

and too you x
No you live in your Poems..Mam. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

3 Years Ago

HAHA.....THANKS AVINASH !! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

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Laminators Dubai

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