Rolling on a cloud of dread.

Rolling on a cloud of dread.

A Poem by Jeremia
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11-14-12 all comments welcomed.

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Another day drifts in

Rolling on a cloud of dread

The darkness of a fallen world surrounds me

Encasing me in a smog like substance

Causing my lungs to cry out in protest

 

As if my lungs were filled with lead

Weighing me down as I lie in bed

Motivation to even roll over escapes me

Further the cloud rolls

Blinding my eyes from seeing

 

I pull the blanket over my head

In an attempt to escape the thickening smog

If I shut my eyes and squeeze real hard

I can push this from my mind


It doesn’t work

 

Another day drifts in

Rolling on a cloud of dread

As if my lungs were filled with lead

Weighing me down as I lie in bed

I pull the blanket over my head

Part of me, wishing I was dead



© 2013 Jeremia


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Wow. I am saddened by such emotions, but, nevertheless, this is veryyy well written! Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Writing is the language of the heart, mind, and imagination. Poetry is the language if the soul. It'.. read more
Jeremia

11 Years Ago

Lol ok then.
That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

((: Everything is going to be okay. I promise.
A nice poem .
I like the first two lines the most.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Wisely by learning more of other sources and tapping in your life experiences .
Selflessly is .. read more
Jeremia

11 Years Ago

It did. Thank you very much. It is difficult for me to write period, cause saying what I'm thinking .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Always do it on your own . Poetry is a work in progress that has no end. Keep climbing to better lev.. read more

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Jeremia
Jeremia

St Cloud, MN



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Well, my name is Jeremia. I honestly don't believe I have much skill in writing, but I find it entertaining when I am able to crank out a poem and/or story. So my desire is to write and then get feedb.. more..

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