Three meaningful words.

There is too much pain deep down inside
All I want to do is hide
I want to crawl into myself and die
If I killed myself, you'd probably question why
I want us to be together, can't you see
But it is impossible for us to be
Our relationship is growing stronger
I hope it will last a whole lot longer
As I lie here with my knife
It threatens to end my life
My life is starting to fall
With one deep slice I could end it all
But I can't. It's like you were sent from above
You give off a vibe of kindness and love
Each day it feels like a piece of me is missing
I want to feel us intertwined and kissing
All I want to do
Is lay down beside you
I'd bury my face into your shoulder
And wish that moment was never over
If only you were near
I could whisper in your ear
All the things I would like to do
But most of all that I love you

Reviews

[Lost, n'MT]

Wow, powerful piece that I can relate to all too well. Very well written and expressed brilliantly, I can understand your pain and I do appreciate you sharing this. I look forward to reading your other writings, this one really stood out to me. Just from this poem alone, I like your style of writing.

[These Haunted Hallways]

I liked this one a lot. Bittersweet, loving, romantic...Excellent poetry, and i can feel this plenty. Great words!

B.A.

[Domo]

Too many tears to give, not enough inside of me to give them all. Good write and keep strong through it all! ☺
~D♥m♥~

[Jamie S.]

Your so young and yet you write so well, bravo. Try not to take love too seriously...yet. I would love to see you write alittle humor, I bet you would do it just as well and it would probably be good for your soul.

-Jamie

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Jamie,

Another longing poem for your love. Love and death definitely seem to be the poles of your passion.

Best regards,

Rick