Left in a lonely sea.

Left in a lonely sea.

A Poem by Mimi
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To my fiance...

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I miss how your…

Face glows in the candle lit room.

Eyebrows rise at my revealing nightgowns.

Eyes look me up and down.

Nose breathes gentle puffs of air against my neck.

Cheek would rest against the top of my head.

Mouth stretches into that gorgeous smile.

Voice was my lullaby in the middle of the night.

Shoulder was the perfect place to rest my head during my darkest of times.

Heartbeat could calm mine to match the pace of yours.

Arms would wrap me tightly in a warm embrace.

Palms run over my warm body, massaging me lovingly.

Fingers caress every curve on my body.

Hips feel against mine.

Legs and how perfectly they intertwine.

But when I open my eyes, you are no longer with me.

My soul left to drown in a lonely sea.

© 2009 Mimi


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Dear Mimi,

This is a georgous piece. There are many lines that are inspiring.

"Mouth stretches into that gorgeous smile"

"Voice was my lullaby in the middle of the night"

"Heartbeat could calm mine to match the pace of yours"

All very nice, Mimi. Beautiful.

This is a very soulful piece. And the emptiness at the end of the poem is piercing. Extremely well done.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A sad and beautiful poem. The description of tenderness and kind love leave us wanting. We must awake alone. But sometime we learn something and maybe we can get lucky in love the next time. Took me 37 years to find my wife. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Amazing piece of writing. It has an amazing message that you have to embrace it or it will be gone just as soon as it came. You portrayed it very well. Again amazing job :)

Dustin XOXO

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the first three and last two wines. Great way to begin and end the peace with a just as excellent body in between.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a very beautiful write, i must say. Great expression of everything here.

B.A.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love how you use the different parts fo teh body to portray a scene, it works very well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful and very wonderful at the same time...
I enjoyed every word of this poem.
You're very talented.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's a very beautiful and passionate write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Dear Mimi,

This is a georgous piece. There are many lines that are inspiring.

"Mouth stretches into that gorgeous smile"

"Voice was my lullaby in the middle of the night"

"Heartbeat could calm mine to match the pace of yours"

All very nice, Mimi. Beautiful.

This is a very soulful piece. And the emptiness at the end of the poem is piercing. Extremely well done.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome poem really enjoyed how you described everything
it really drawed me in.
And it also made me realize how much i miss that "special someone"
Keep on writing,
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes Mimi

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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