All I want..

I want to reform myself
The way i'd been for years
With fusion of several emotions,
That includes smiles and silent tears...


Now, i want her eyes to reflect my memories
Want her tears to tell our poignant stories...
Want her forehead to kiss,
And make her aware to sense my untold wish....

The moment when we meet
I want tranquil everywhere
Not even the songs of bird to hear,
Only the wind at its sweetest flow...
And the sun without its scorching glow...

I want to feel her breath in air...
Coz i want to unfold
My buried secrets to her
I want her gaze to hypnotize me once again,
My life has become a lava bed...
Come and soothe it be that
Rain........

Author's Note

Just words and love:)

Reviews

[Maxwell Ryder]

May I make just one recommendation. No changing of words, just put “be that rain” on its own line...

And change “became” for “become”

Sorry.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful- ‘unfold my buried secrets to her’- just wonderful- what a beautiful thing to do for someone you love - love keeps no secrets- 🌹

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch for your time and review:)

[lightsong]

VERY very very lovely, very warming loving and special, some sentences captured my eyes tenderly and strongly, " I want her eyes to reflect my memories...." ahhh my friend this is breathtaking because deep inside this shows the abondeded completely to love, the absolute trust in Your love... each verse of Your poem stands alone under a spotlight, what I might wish from You is to rewrite some of Your words, like don't write "u", but "You", Your enchanting poem deserves to be written in that way, just my humble opinion, from my mind's~ heart's eyes :)

[Govind singh]

Thnks u so mch sir for your time and review...:)

[lightsong]

again, not a Sir lol, but a ma'am :)

[Himanshu]

Just thinking to make you my fav poet... Such a awsm talent at this young age.. Going to rock the world soon ....

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch himu..love ya:)

[barleygirl]

One of the most lyrical & unusual love poems I've read in awhile. Normally I'm not crazy about love poems becuz so many are written all sounding the same. But yours is very unique. Your way of writing suggests the sensations of sweetness going thru variations between smooth-flowing & tumbling over rocks . . . it's more a sensation, reading you, than actually interpreting your words thru my brain. Amazing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch...Ur reviews always encourages me..(hugs)..

[Gee]

Such a sweet, romantic wide Govind. For me could do with a little tidying up just to improve the cadence, but that's just me !!

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch...I'm glad u enjoyed..

[John the Baptist]

Has a "Prodigal Son" sound to it, the contrite attitude of one who has lost something great, but is just now realizing it. The emotion is genuine, a possible portent of reconciliation.

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so much sir for Ur precious tym and beautiful words...I appreciate it

[CD Campbell]

Nice write. I hope that you have those things or are close to getting them. Well wishes. CD

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch sir for Ur supportive words...means a lot

[Sami Khalil]

Words of love and romance breathing life into desires and wishes. Wonderful, Govind...

[Govind singh]

Thnk U sir..

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Pash]

Wow! Great stuff. This poem left me wanting more. It has desire! It has passion!
It's flaming hot!
DB

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch sir...I appreciate your time and review.:)