The Very Last One

A Poem by Laura Grace

A sliver of light.

The last bit of bright.

The one that's holding on tight

To the time that took flight.

© 2011 Laura Grace

Author's Note

Thoughts, critiques, etc?
Also, I hadn't posted anything in a super long time so my inspiration for this was kind of weak. That's why the poem is so short and really pretty meaningless. If you own a macbook or macbook pro you'll realize there's a little sliver of light on the front side that sort of glows and dims. Well, I was on my sister's macbook writing poetry and I saw that and I immediately became entranced by it.

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Wolfwind Words

Memories of a joyous day, as the fading sunsets and reflects upon the silver hand of a grandfather clock, ticking away. It speaks of memories and the walk upon the road of the moments past. Beautiful imagery!

Aaron

Posted 10 Months Ago

The Rock And Roll Cowbo..

Very whimsical piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Morrigan Nicole

nice rhymes

Posted 1 Year Ago

roy mccarthy

maybe a sunset ?!
nnice short rhymey poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago

~Lizzy♬

I loved the poem. It rhymed and was very powerful for a short poem. Well done! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 1 Year Ago

SoulCrusader (Yas)

Very nice poem, I enjoyed it :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

stars are far

Nice one
the Rhyme is great ..
well done ..

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on October 2, 2011
Last Updated on November 12, 2011
Tags: light, time, flight, poem, Graci, writer, poetry

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Laura Grace

Seattle, WA

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Everything here is pretty self-explanatory. I used to be under the display name Graci but I've kind of outgrown that name. Sorry if that's a cause of confusion. more..