Paint me like you did before

Paint me like you did before

A Poem by Gracious
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An exercise where I create a ballad poem from the book "Heist society" by Ally Carter

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Paint me like you did before
Your words brush blue across my heart
Your touch brings Strokes of red
Your words brush blue across my heart
And black inside my head

Your eyes smear green across my body
'twas not from these I walked away
your lips paint pink across my ears
yet there is nothing left to say

I walked from stealing others' strokes
I wanted my own name
I walked from stealing others' strokes
I thought that we could be the same

But there are those I owe a debt
Those worth stealing for
You must forgive me of choices made
and paint me like you did before
-Gracious

© 2014 Gracious


Author's Note

Gracious
An exercise where I create a ballad poem from the book "Heist society" by Ally Carter

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Your creativity shines in this beautiful poem!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gracious

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I really appreciate that :) Stay Awesome
Absolutely stunning piece, such creative imagery!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gracious

9 Years Ago

thank you so much
This is very creative, I love the imagery here, the chosen colors to represent the piece. great write, very meaningful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gracious

9 Years Ago

thank you that means a lot to me:)
the way you smeared your canvas with the colours of your words, its fascinating!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gracious

9 Years Ago

I'm very glad you interpreted this in that way :)

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Added on May 26, 2014
Last Updated on May 26, 2014
Tags: heist Society, Ballad, Painting

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