WritersBlock

Is it writers block if you wrote about having writers block?

Bits and pieces

Something there

Coherent thoughts

But prone to tear

Schizophrenic?

slightly so

These words can fight,

resisting flow

What once defined

now floats away

No longer focused

Mind, astray

Author's Note

Feedack?

Reviews

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

" Is it writers block if you wrote about having writers block?" - Nope it's unlikely inspiration love it.

I've read a few of yours now this is my favorite so far clever little write I love the flow!

The punctuation of the 6th and 8th line are perfect making the reader soften the tone almost to a whisper and the rhyming is spot on well done :)

[Robert Parlange]

You got it right. Sometimes it is all so elusive. Just won't gel.

Very good poem. Keep writing.

[Lauren]

This is a great poem, love it!

[several thousand]

I like it! Rhyming is perfect and it's fun to read. Well done.

[Gee]

I agree with Miss Pepperweb,super little poem

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Haha. That's the best writers block ever.
You should get it more often. :)
Amazing where we draw bits of inspiration from.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

What once defined
now floats away
No longer focused
Mind, astray

This lines really holds a lot & also they do mean everything in to this world. You're a great writer!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

somehow...i believe all artists have their schizophrenia...like Brian Wilson...the voices...the craziness that comes along with being a poet...or painter...it's just there, they are there.

[Troy Henson]

Love the short lines. The description strong. I think we all face the horrible undertone writers block now and again.

[Church]

Well written and smooth. Definitely something I can relate to.

You addressed a serious problem, was easily understood, and in very few words.

Well done.