Fractured

Fractured

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 5/25/15 Chisel Away

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Negative thoughts
Chisel their way into
My skull barrier
Sculpting
The marble that is my mind.
[End]

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet



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Beautifully written. Feelings from the cranium run deep into many souls chipping away at the spirit. Only to embark on deeper freedoms per say.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Kyam! :]
Thank Sereena for sending this, an outstanding write, conjuring deep thoughts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Ana!
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alf
Hi GreenEyedPoet. Brevity, description, great word choice. you have delivered it all!!! Love this, and I will be back on site real soon!!! alf

Posted 2 Years Ago


alf

2 Years Ago

No problem!!! Send me anything you'd like me to read!! alf
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

I think we have to be friends to be able to send RR's. Or am I wrong about that?
alf

2 Years Ago

Probably, but I can fix that!!!
Marvelous. Thanks to Sereena who sent me the RR.
A perfect description of how the negativity brings us down. Lovely :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Nazia! :]
And that's the reality of how negative thoughts are. Brilliant :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Very true Anne.
Thanks for stopping by and checking it out! :)
Anne Verona

2 Years Ago

No problem :)
GEP OUTSTANDING WORK THAT BLEW ME AWAY!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Aw thanks AM, that made me smile. :)
Making the perfect
Piece of art

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Wow, thank you Nisreenaa! :)
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Until you put a mirror
and their fractured pain
tore darkness apart--
I can smile again :D

no chiseling away into my friend's skull :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


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2 Years Ago

well said anyone :D lol -- okay time for me to string those zzzzz's :D good night beautiful ladies :.. read more
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Oh you guys have just started a war, you guys aren't getting off this easy! lol. :P
But for n.. read more
sereenaoutloud

2 Years Ago

Night night Moonskittle x
Well...dark and powerful write. Very well penned, it reflects me almost perfectly. Rating 100# I'd like to thank Sereena for the read request.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

I'd say I'm glad you could relate to this piece, but that wouldn't be a good thing lol.
I wou.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

You are welcome
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dan
A title? How about "Skullpture?" sereena sent this to me to review and I'm so glad she did. I wish I could write short, powerful pieces like this. Mine aren't bad but they are all approximately the same length. A mind made of marble? Priceless. I'm bookmarking your page and will try to review some more ASAP. Very nice write! take care...dan

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the title suggestion Dan! I decided to go with the suggestion that Sereena gave me - Frac.. read more

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