Hollowed Heart

Hollowed Heart

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 4/28/15 You've gone missing...

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Hollow out

My heart

I no longer want to feel

The haunting ghost

Of your missing

Presence


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© 2015 GreenEyedPoet



Author's Note

GreenEyedPoet
Drawing by Derek Hess.

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I soo can relate!! Loved this!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Terry!
Sorry you can relate but glad you enjoyed the poem. :)
I always love reading poems that are so short, and yet so bone chilling at the same time. It's very hard to accomplish that with so few words, so you can definitely color me impressed by this poem! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Haha I don't usually write short poems, only have a couple on here but this one just kind of wrote i.. read more
DoormanDan

2 Years Ago

It was very enjoyable :)
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it. :D
this is so ominous and beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Randal! :]
the ghost of a missing presence....great phrasing...feeling pain is one thing, but i think maybe feeling total coldness, total nothingness might be worse.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Numbness has never been something I've liked feeling, but in this case the feelings that come from t.. read more
S**t. Wow... I just... uhm... short poem, but literally shot a bullet through my heart. In just a few lines, I had these memories crashing down at once, and it takes a really really... really great poem for that to happen to anyone (and I was even listening to happy music just now). This is... This is beautiful. Wow. I'm speechless. Great... Beautiful and magnificent poem right here :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

That's awesome!
Now you just need to get them on here lol.
Anne Verona

2 Years Ago

Yes. I will soon :)
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

That's great. :)
love this so much... the photo (a crucifixion) and form create the arrow used to pierce that heart... it is sad to lose the ones we have come to know and love so well... great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

I totally didn't intend for it to look like an arrow, I just got lucky with that! Lol.
Thanks.. read more
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2 Years Ago

sometimes it's our subconscious creativity at work lol... you are welcome!
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Haha must've been what it was!
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Gee
The drawing and your piece are matched perfectly.Very good Ashley

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Gee. :D
I'm big on presentation. There is so much awe in your words as is. It's good to see you kept it brief, as opposed to writing verse after verse.

This is monumental, Ashley!



Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Presentation is always important, so I try to add a little something extra when I feel the need too... read more
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Great paradox my dear. Wanting to escape the emptiness of his presence by making a bigger hole.
well done!!
now, the next one has to be about butterflies and daffodils :D :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

1 - how is it we? I'm not ganging up on myself! lol. So it's just you two! lol.

2 - w.. read more
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2 Years Ago

kkkkkkkkkkkkkk :D
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Don't wanna tell me what you two did huh? lol. Must've been really bad lol.
Love it.. Yes you do dark so well! So few word but wow what an impact they make! The photo is a perfect match for this. Missing someone that pain we wish to not feel anymore ,,, brilliant Girlie!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


sereenaoutloud

2 Years Ago

Yes I am so lucky I got to preview it ... So special I am lol
It's is again an awesome piece.. read more
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Of course your special! :D
I don't just let any ol' person get a preview to my writes.
sereenaoutloud

2 Years Ago

Lol ... Hehhehe

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