Fragile Broken Things

Fragile Broken Things

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 2/8/15. Trusting you with the most fragile thing I have.

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Let the endless bleeding cease
I don't want to feel this anymore
My heart is lonely
And at times feels like
It's broken in pieces
If I rip it out
And give it to you
Maybe you can
Stitch it back together
I apologize
For getting blood on your hands
But I'm trusting you
With the most fragile thing I have
(End)

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet



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Loved this!! I can tell you really feel.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed the piece Terry, thanks again! :]
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Gee
Liked this very much,one day your frog kissing days will come to an end and your prince will stand before you!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Gee!
Haha you're right, one day. I just hope it's sooner then later lol.
Yes, when we give our heart to another, we are trusting them with the most important part of us....the most fragile part as well. I liked the change in font color here. Such an emotive write. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia! :]
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A truly emotional write dear friend. Trusting is one thing and surrendering is another. Your words show the true need of finding that warm place where we can be put together each time were broken.
Great formatting and picture choice. :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Moony dear!
I have thankfully found that place where I can be put back together whenev.. read more
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2 Years Ago

You're welcome and Amen!!!
It truly is the most fragile thing we can give to another, and yet we do, time and time again. I loved how you worded this, Ashley...and formatted it to the right of the page. It commands attention, deservingly so!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Kelly!
Yes we do seem to keep giving it away at every chance we get, don't we? I gu.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

2 Years Ago

I was just reading your bio - I have a younger brother who was born on a "Friday the 13th". I consi.. read more
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Haha I've always thought it was a cool day (not just cause it's my birthday lol) and 13 is my lucky .. read more
This is an emotional piece Greeneyedpoet. The heart is a fragile thing that someone can break so easily, a word, a look, a comment, betrayal, etc. But the best part the heart can mend and find another and that other person might be the one that always protects you heart so it will never me broken again.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Robert!
The heart is fragile and doesn't take much to break it but like you said it ca.. read more
Stark, yet very heartfelt. I like it so.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Kenneth! Glad you liked it. :)
One of the most endearing writes I have read in a while...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Chris

2 Years Ago

You'll never realize the moments you brought to mind
and the way voices caught and eyes fille.. read more
Chris

2 Years Ago

you take care.
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Yea I'm sure we all have. You take care too Chris. :)
I just love this one girlie, it is so strong and a different take on mending a broken heart. I especially love ..

"I apologize for getting blood on your hands"

So true when we have been so heart broken or burned before that we bring the damage with us our blood for someone else to have to take on !!

Just brilliant Ashley!! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks girlie! Glad you liked my poem. :D
Haha that is my fave line too! Makes it sound a bit.. read more
Wow..honestly at first I thought of commenting that broken hearts can never be mended.Not at all possible.But this takes a different turn.It's still broken.Yet,every piece is ennobled by profound trust.This teaches me how to trust others or atleast one person, in spite of having practically nothing.Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

And thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem! :D
fattycbreezy52

2 Years Ago

In that case, you are lucky..I can never have those views so very easily because I have been through.. read more
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Oh trust me, I've been through a lot lol. And don't worry you can't contaminate my thought process l.. read more

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Tags: Bleeding, Heart, Lonely, Broken, Pieces, Stitch, Trust, Fragile

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Hey, I'm Ashley. Here's some random things about me - I was born on Friday the 13th. I have 1 brother and 4 sisters. My family and friends are very important to me. I have two of the greatest best fr.. more..

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