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Letting You In

Letting You In

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet

Written 7/21/15 Taking a risk - Letting you in.


Let me hold your heart
So I may restore
The color of love
Back to the bleached
Parts of me.
Ignite the fuse
And set my heart
I'm handing over
The scissors to the
Stitched up
Hole in my chest,
I'm letting you in to
My closed off heart.

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet

Author's Note

This is a response to my poem 'Haven't Met You Yet'.
If you haven't gotten a chance to check that piece out, please do! :]

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Nowadays, they do not need to use scissors anymore since they either use staples or self-dissolving thread :D -- you are safe from that point.
a great way of describing love returning! :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


3 Years Ago

Thanks Moony!
Haha you are right, there is no need for scissors anymore but oh well! Lol.
:) a great response to "Haven't Met You Yet"...it's funny how these things happen when we need them most... sometimes it is worth the risk :)...

Posted 3 Years Ago


3 Years Ago

Thanks Tom!
Thankfully I don't think it's to big of a risk, otherwise I don't think God would.. read more
Nice, nice, very nice. Pithy--to the point, yet colorful and oozing.

May the love leak back into your being... and perhaps those scissors are meant for you to handle ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


3 Years Ago

Thanks Crispy!
Haha well yes I guess I could use those scissors myself but I don't need too.<.. read more

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Added on July 23, 2015
Last Updated on July 24, 2015
Tags: Love




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