Fallen

I have fallen like an egg

From a cliff high nest

Broken at birth

Into the river of life

Washed into a sea

Of illusion and deceit

The truth is clear

Now I can see

I am too weak

To fight

So please

Fight for me

Reviews

[Angela]

Beautiful and rich with metaphors. "Washed into a sea of illusion and deceit" so powerful. and I am too weak to fight, so please fight for me." gut wrenching. I love this

[The Cougar's Den]

Nicely done. Very visually stimulating...Great job!

[Emily B]

we will fight for each other

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Amazing short poem. Great metaphors, original for sure. "Washed into a sea of ilIllusion and deceit.” A kind of poem you can even write more and expound on.
But I like it just the way it is.

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