Fork in the Path: The Rebel

rebellious conscience

open your eyes,

The faults are too wide,

These depths drop too deep,

Watch your every step

Question the Hypocrite

Open your eyes,

black and white covers your peripherals

Embrace the colors in front of you

I'm painting a clear image

Question your Sanity

Open your ears,

i don't mind your ignorance, but,

you're slipping out of reach

cant you hear the distraction?

Question the illusion

Open your mind,

 equations of division

ignorance hides the variables

Prophet,Profit

logic

This doesn't add up

Question the logic 

Open your heart,

the words within are you,

what remains is me.

"I am the center in you"

I will never leave

"i promise"

"I apologize for the areas of grey i have neglected. Its just,  

These color coated patterns have become so iridescent" 

Embrace me

Author's Note

please take into consideration the placement of some words, there is an underlying message here. Pun intended

Reviews

[McBear]

Seems like you are bluntly describing the words you said like hypocrite and such.

[Aero]

The hypocrite relates to the voice in my other poem, the hypocrite is religion

[Prantik Ali]

WoW!
Great. Brilliantly written!
Keep it up :) :) :)

[Aero]

Thank you i appreciate it man!

[mjsalyers]

This is a great song that seems to be a challenge towards a love to do the right thing.

[Aero]

In a way yes, its mostly about following yourself instead of giving into religious believes. follow your own intuition as well as your own conscience. Although your conscience is a rebel to religion.

[hisyam]

Great... I like the rhythm....