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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Nitrogen Narcosis

Nitrogen Narcosis

A Poem by Aero
"

Even happiness has a dark side

"
Raise my hand 
 In name of Question 
Clicks of incite change intentions
 Naive knowledge,
 Beligerant Innocence
 Curse this clean slate 
 No trace of fingerprints

 Give in
 Bleed out
 Gifted and driven
 Achknowledge any doubt
 Lurking in the shaddows
 Darkness provides saftey
 lack of light sparks the demons fright
 Even they wont try to chase me 

 In control, 
ive become empowered 
Backed into a corner 
footsteps getting louder 
Such a silent sound 
"Back down" 

 Stacking stones
 To approach my thrown, Oh, 
let the games begin
 I am sure to win 
Over and over again 

Failure, failure 
Distant Sailor Sink or swim, 
come on in Oh but, the water is fine
 Deeper, deeper My depths create pressure
 Compressed in waters Believe in me, 
im now your shepperd 

Welcome to the family
 I will give you hope 
I will restore value 
I will bring you down to my level
 Just so i can drown you

© 2016 Aero


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As a diver I was drawn to your piece by the name and the analogy. Following a leader is fine, but one must be sure the path being shown or offered is the correct path for you.

To long held back in the wrong place can bring death. Don't follow unless the path is safe for you.

Nicely done piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I see things in this that the other readers do not dare to see. I have been the victim with the beligerant innocence and the naive knowledge....only to be lured in by those words.."come on in, the water is fine" which of course turn out to be lies.

This is not about your failure, as the other readers perceive it, but about the game of the predator and the prey. The depth of getting into the mind of the victim is a poweful tool that works every time and renders the prey helpless ...having to let the "shepperd" lead...only to lead the prey to destruction.

It is a great writing about this process. Only those who have been on one side or the other side of this game would understand the depth of the meanings and the metaphors.

This is a brilliant piece, although there is terror in it that has to be felt in order for the words to re-trigger it.

Annie💃

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, this poem gets really deep at the end. This does show how happiness does have a dark side, and how it can over come someones life. The last stanza explains that perfectly. I really like this poem, and can't wait to read more!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


What an interesting approach to face the failure. It's an abstract art. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 25, 2015
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Aero
Aero

Stony Point, NY



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A Poem by Aero