"Falling Again"

It's going straight to my head
I think I'm falling in love again
Some simple miracles have happend
Since your steady hands have come
And stopped my unraveling

Your fingers built for the piano
Work out the knots that line my back
The stress I've stored since last December
But now it doesn't matter
I've learned to leave it in my past

I feel good about the future
This clarity I've never had
You are the bounce in my step
The burst of blood in my chest
The prayer I've kept in my head

You are the knock in my knees
The slow sound of each song
I scribble down and tear up
Because they never match up
You are the words I fumble

And in the morning you are the daybreak
And I am glad

And at night you are the dream
I fall asleep to have

Reviews

[Just Me]

Very nice!!!

[Blood_knight3000]

This is good. Your poems have begun to sound more lyrical.

[GreenAngle]

cuteee! and so sweet, it's a beautiful piece. the writing is meaningful =)

[JB Murray]

Very nice write.

[Michael Mwachofi]

This was such a beautifully written piece. The attention you gave to each of the words is truly astounding and some of the similes you gave in here i'd never heard of...this was great stuff :D

I feel good about the future
This clarity I've never had
You are the bounce in my step
The burst of blood in my chest
The prayer I've kept in my head

"You are the knock in my knees
The slow sound of each song
I scribble down and tear up
Because they never match up
You are the words I fumble"

Great stuff!
~M.Babu~

[PoppySilver]

Such beautiful words love, a wonderful stream of emotion xoxo

[the in between]

You can write really sweet poems. This one is the best I think. Thanks for sharing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

When love take over mind and thoughts. We are in trouble. I like the story in the poem.
"You are the knock in my knees"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[realmwriter]

Wow, This is a very beautiful piece. I really enjoyed reading it. My favorite lines are
"You are the knock in my knees
The slow sound of each song
I scribble down and tear up
Because they never match up
You are the words I fumble
e " I feel tongue tied all the time around the one I love and I haven't even met her f2f yet...!

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

expressive poem. A pleasure to read.