whispers in the wind

whispers in the wind

A Poem by Obby
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Something for encouragement

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Love with your heart & unconditionally
For love is worthless to one & priceless to two
He who confuses it with lust forgets the patience of cupid.

Be faithful to the one you love
For the heart is full of passion & truthfulness
He who cheats will forever be haunted by regrate.

Be content with what you have
Being greedy ruined the lives of many men
He who is ungrateful will forever be poor.

Do not be controlled by envy
Cain killed his own beloved brother because of soup
He who is jealousy forgets the love of his mother.

Be careful for what you wish for
The great knights underestimated the power of the mind
He who is controlled by anger will never know peace.

Help those in need & expect no favor
Even the rich king failed to buy respect & love
He who is stingy will forever be blinded by his riches.

Listen carefully to what others tell you
Many wise words are blown away by the winds & forever lost
He who ignores is as deaf as a snake.

Do not lose faith in everything
Every one needs an anchor in life
He who does not believe will never move a mountain.


**i hope this will help someone somewhere

© 2022 Obby


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There is much thoughtfulness to this poem... you touch on so many important notions that are very truthful....and you are sharing them as a well constructed piece,
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wonderful insight in this write, holds truth. Nicely written...
much enjoyed your words

Posted 4 Years Ago


Obby

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the review,glad you enjoyed
An honest write. Enjoyed reading this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Obby

4 Years Ago

thanks for the review
Hey Jack you placed a lot of gems in that basket of thoughts! Whispers that need to be shouted on high

Posted 4 Years Ago


Obby

4 Years Ago

thanks for the review
Gives the reader a strength :) Lovely weaving of poignant thoughts :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Obby

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the review
Great wisdom shared in your words. I agree with them. If you love someone. Pay attention and listen to them. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Obby

4 Years Ago

That's very true,thank you for the review

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Added on May 10, 2018
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Obby
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Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa



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