A Furry Companion

A Furry Companion

A Poem by ~Nina~
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~Dedicated to my beloved dog, Max. Love you, buddy!~

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Chestnut eyes,
Pitch-black fur.
Floppy ears,
And paws that stir.

A kind heart,
One I trust.
A loving soul,
Who's never fussed.

Loyalty, affection,
Courage, and more.
Just a few reasons,
Why him, I adore.

Friend, companion,
Ally, pal.
That is why,
Love him, I shall.


© 2013 ~Nina~


Author's Note

~Nina~
Thank you for reading! Be sure to check out a few of my other works! While you're at it, I'd be extremely pleased you have you as a new friend! Write on! ;)

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Cute, and unique way of writing. I like!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cute descriptive poem. The third stanza is my favorite. Nice dedication to him. Lovely pic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great dedication. No one will love you like your dog.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this. I am a dog owner too, though in truth I believe the dogs own me. Very nice Nina. He is a beautiful dog and you have penned him a beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


~Nina~

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
I love the dog much than a write ...lol (just kidding) yes, the dog is very nice and even love such kinda smooth and silky hairy dogs.
This write reminds about friendship if humans with animals somehow, your imaginary's great here and i loved the theme that you've had to write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


~Nina~

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Nice poem, ain't our canine creatures amazing, the way they love us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


~Nina~

10 Years Ago

Why, thank you!
Aw, what a nice tribute to man's (woman's) best friend! Very sweet

Posted 10 Years Ago


~Nina~

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
If I may offer a suggestion or two that would help with the flow of the piece:

If you change "One I'm able to trust" to "One I trust"

"One who's never fussed" to "Who's never fussed"

"Merely a few reasons" to "Just a few reasons"

Other than that, it's a warm and affectionate poem. i enjoyed reading it. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


~Nina~

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm still learning a lot about the art of writing, though I've been at it for years. Stil.. read more
Marcus Parks

10 Years Ago

Are you really? That's pretty articulate language for your age, which is awesome.
~Nina~

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Added on May 25, 2013
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Tags: animals, animal, poem, max, dog, dogs

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~Nina~
~Nina~

Manitou Springs, CO, CO



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