Monarch, i

Monarch, i

A Poem by Grimshaw
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I drift unnoticed

Elegantly,

With my plain pattern complexion.

Un-endangered

Unadventurous

Un-excitedly.

Wings tear against the sharp edges of the rough natural surface

Still I lift them
Plain and torn as they are

Proudly.

Still they carry me high,

Through the migration of my monotonous life.

And thankful I am.

© 2014 Grimshaw


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Oooh I really like this piece! I found it really graceful and balletic. It was quite short, but really well written and everything flowed really well with the verbs you chose. I gave it a 90/100 ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Grimshaw

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment! I appreciate it.

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Grimshaw
Grimshaw

South Africa



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I love short burts of expression. My writing in inspired by e e cimmings, stephen cranes poem in the desert. Currently working on a short stoy, and my favorite form to write in is free verse. more..

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