A Natural Hug

Truth of nature.

A smile comes like

as on infant face,

seeing the blooming flower,hike 

as a lovely pace.

Spring, a love of bite,

a flowery kite,

an emerald foilage

and ruby mileage.

A charm of drops

which bog your dry heart.

Make your feeling pop

which brings happiness full of cart.

Monsoon, a boon for field,

proud like having shield.

Our heart eager to rain dance

by looking on antic glance.

A moment of air thirst,

to soak sweat of fiend hot.

All is hot around like crust;

we just carry the ice-cold pot.

Summer, sun's anger

burning the skin and give look danger.

We lick the water drop

as like crop

A sound of teeth, like 

sharing feelings in ice cold.

A smoke out from the body and mouth like

showing the talent of bold.

Winter, king of seasons

with many reasons.

Lazy feelings in lovely quilt

chewing nuts with great assault.

Leaves and flower become of gold,

crunch like munch.

Wait for new one, leaving the old

footsteps on golden crunch.

Autumn, a cool feeling

in Oct. and Nov. dealings.

With naked body and soul

without repenting the fowl.

This hug from nature

with full of creature

which make our life alive

with shower of season's dive.

~ Gul.

Author's Note

This s the first ever poem which I am posting here.
I just started with writercafe.org.

Reviews

[Neelam]

The miraculous nature brought into the comfort of home. Vividly told.

[Gul]

Thanx Neelam

[KeeD]

Hi Gul, this is a warm and very primal poem. It reconnected me with the Earth. Good stuff,once you completely get a firm grasp on the intricacies of English there is no stopping your poetry, you'll be one of the greats! Keep writing! :)

[Gul]

Thank you so much Keegan, your words meant a lot.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

This is a great first effort Gul! Beautiful form, rhyme, and imagery of nature and the seasons. Even more amazing as English is not your native language. Keep writing !

[Gul]

I am grateful for your motivation. I will keep writing.