A Darken Sin

A Darken Sin

A Poem by Gul

A selfish human!


The world is painted black
with sins of human,
not heavy but heavier on shoulder,
not able to light a spot.

Foliage turned gray
in mourn and stress for doom.
Emerald wood yelp
to save his existence.

O! reckless man,
preserve us to save your existence.
O! Stupid, befriend, no foe
otherwise no land for your toe.

© 2017 Gul

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Haunting poem of warning to mankind about how evilly the earth and its creatures are used. We destroy our own earth and therefore our own life. Your last two lines tell it brilliantly! Brava Gul!

Posted 11 Months Ago


11 Months Ago

Thank you Annette, your words mean a lot. I am just trying to write my heart out, what I feel.
A dark and powerful writing with a brisk message for humans. Either shape up or ship out. Indeed Gul, its now or never for us.

Posted 11 Months Ago


11 Months Ago

Thanks a lot, Divya. yes, your are correct, its now or never for us.
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Added on September 30, 2017
Last Updated on September 30, 2017



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