Why me?

Why me only every time, why should I sacrifice all the time.

A smile, shattered into pieces

every time and every second,

But why, only me why?

A joy cries to be remain long

which seems not possible

But why, only me why?

A treasure bangs to be loud

remorse, it stays cheap

But why, only me why?

The tools, fight for self defense

but repent, remained blunt

But why, only me why?

The wish, I had for my life

not seems flourished

But why, only me why?

This repent pierced my heart

till end, because I am maiden

But why, only me why?

~Gul

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think we all feel tis only us a t times of distress. But if we look carefully many others are also suffering but wearing masks to keep it from others. I guess when I feel that way I think of the terrible suffering some are going through in the world. A powerful write that provokes much thought.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Why me? Say try me......
With storms and with every test in life, I grow by each one.....n each one......RISE

[emmajoy]

There are horrors in this world, gross unfairness and cruel attitudes. Your thoughts are so finely and clearly stated, yet, the strength of your emotions are clearly obvious. Gul. I can only hope and pray that it won't be too long before you and other women in your country are given the choices you have every right to in this day and age. Your courageous and determined poem shows your worth very clearly, dear friend

[Gul]

Thank you so much emmajoy for your support and feedback

[emmajoy]

Am more than willing to review such powerful words.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

The world treats women so unfairly in many countries. Your beautiful poem is such a personal way to ask “why, only me why”? The form and flow and emotion of this poem are great. I can hear and feel your pain, and I join you in your fight for equality and fair treatment. I pray that someday it will be so. You are so brave Gul! Blessings to you.

[Gul]

Thank you so much Annette for your warm appreciation, however it is not only for one, it is for everyone who are bearing up with this pain. The only thing is to break the silence and fight for right.

[DIVYA]

A moment of introspection beautifully expressed. One feels unfairly treated by life but that only makes ine more determined to suceed.

[Gul]

yeah! exactly only negativity creates the positivity into soul and heart. When we are disheartened then only we try other ways to get the way back.