My World

My World

A Poem by Giullia King

"Stop thinking about it" He said.
"It's not the end of the world."

"I know" she answered with trembling lips.
"But it's the end of my world."




© 2018 Giullia King



Author's Note

Giullia King
Sunday scribble. Be kind, always.

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Succinctly expresses the point of view of male and female very well. The somewhat callous boy and the sensitive girl play off each other and tell a complex story in a few well-written words. There is a great deal more to this interaction than is realized at first reading. If this is 'Sunday scribble' I'll take more.

Good write, Gullia.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Ted! Sorry for the delay here .)
well said,
commendable job

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Apoorva
Be kind? ;0

Hmm.....

It's somewhat sad and sweet. Seems to me the female has lost her purpose or the will to go on, whether metaphorically or literally.

Pretty good, Kingy!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Yes, be kind.!
Thank you so much :)
The duality of perception - neatly and poetically explored in a few words - excellent!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words :)
I've always been one who feels everything so deeply, and everything goes directly to my heart. That's the message this gives me, Gullia.

Your image is off the wall - incredible! Great thought process to compliment it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your amazing words, Kelly! I've always been like that too! :)
The feeling of sadness comes out of this short poem. As well as nicely written. Well done! I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

I'm happy you liked my poem, Paul :)
Short Lines Explained So Much Bigger Thing......

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading
You said everything in the short poetry. Artwork and words. Outstanding work dear Gullia.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear friend!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Gullia.
I think to relate to this is to know this feeling and to know this feeling is very sad indeed.
Nicely conveyed Gullia.
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading, Tony :)
Love in few words. your poems has much in few words :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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