Lost Soul

"My love," she said with mesmerizing eyes. 

"You have touched me and I have grown."

 

He looked at her and smiled. 

Thinking he finally found his lost soul.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Paul]

This poem brings out nothing but wonderful imagery of love. Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.

[Giullia King]

Thank you for your kind words, Paul!

[Lovecraft]

I laughed when I saw the picture, couldn't help myself. ;)

Very short but quite good. Great Love can nurture us, make us better than what we once were.

[Giullia King]

Lol why? It's art!

[Sonakshi Arora]

We see our reflections in other! This was a beautiful write !

[Giullia King]

Thank you! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Lovely poem to read .....

[Giullia King]

Thank you!

[mercy party]

...it was there all along.
i really liked how you scripted this.
very good!

[Giullia King]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Ted Kniffen]

Well done, Gullia. Short and sweet but say everything about finding a soulmate.

[Giullia King]

Thank you so much, Ted. I'm happy you liked it :)

[BBP]

You nailed what you are great at. The short dialogue pieces that say so much in such a small package.

Finding his soul in her is such a beautiful thought.

[Giullia King]

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm happy you like my short dialogues :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Short and beautiful.
The pic reminded me of my bio classes when I had to make diagrams like these and.. I was lousy at it 😂
I liked reading this 😊😊👍

[Giullia King]

Thank you for your kind words, Yumna! This is the second picture that you don't like lmao!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahahahah I did get the creeps yeah 😂 but really unintentional 😉😛
You're welcome, Gullia! Always a pleasure 💜

[Ana Papaya]

such a sweet piece, love your use of brevity here.
awesome

[Giullia King]

Thank you, Ana! :)

[Joey Nizz]

So sweet words with beauty too much, well wrote :)

[Giullia King]

Thank you, Joey :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome Gullia ^^