Lost Soul

Lost Soul

A Poem by Giullia King

"My love," she said with mesmerizing eyes. 
"You have touched me and I have grown."
 
He looked at her and smiled. 
Thinking he finally found his lost soul.


© 2017 Giullia King



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Lovely poem to read .....

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you!
...it was there all along.
i really liked how you scripted this.
very good!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words!
Well done, Gullia. Short and sweet but say everything about finding a soulmate.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Ted. I'm happy you liked it :)
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You nailed what you are great at. The short dialogue pieces that say so much in such a small package.

Finding his soul in her is such a beautiful thought.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm happy you like my short dialogues :)
Short and beautiful.
The pic reminded me of my bio classes when I had to make diagrams like these and.. I was lousy at it 😂
I liked reading this 😊😊👍

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words, Yumna! This is the second picture that you don't like lmao!
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9 Months Ago

Hahahahah I did get the creeps yeah 😂 but really unintentional 😉😛
You're welcome, G.. read more
such a sweet piece, love your use of brevity here.
awesome

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Ana! :)
So sweet words with beauty too much, well wrote :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Joey :)
Joey Nizz

9 Months Ago

Your welcome Gullia ^^
Awe I found this piece to be really sweet, it's true love when the other helps you grow. Nicely done my friend :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

I'm happy you liked this one :) Thank you, dear friend
Kesha

9 Months Ago

You are welcome:)
oh this is beautiful dear author. This is how love should be :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

I agree with you :) Thank you for your kind words, Ana! I'm happy you liked it!
A reminder that when we find something, we lose something. But when we lose something, we find something. What a paradox.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Paradox, indeed. Thank you for reading!

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