Stardust

Stardust

A Poem by Giulia King

She takes a deep breath and sighs. "Oh darling"  
She whispers into the darkness. 
"If our souls are made out of stardust, then how come my skin feels like a desert?"  
The depths of her soul lives in poetry, 
in a in-between world with him. 
"You're the brightness of a star,  
The magic in my life." 
"You're the only secret my heart guards."  
She says as she gently puts her arms around him and blissfully drifts off into infinity. 



© 2017 Giulia King



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The pic and poetry are so perfectly matched. This vibrates at an almost eerie frequency, the line about the skin like a desert lends a weird reality to it as the other lines are all fabulously supernatural. Great writing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nicely and elegantly done

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much! :)
An entire story said nine verses. This is something incredible.

~Lyla

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

10 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely words, Lyla! :))
Oh this is beautiful. Has a relaxed romantic feel.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

10 Months Ago

I was going for that relaxed romantic feel :) Thank you for reading!
Love can do that to you. A cataclysmic burst of the universe cannot contain the depth, the broad expanse of the love you wish to share with him and hope he wishes to share his with you. I like what you have to say.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

10 Months Ago

Sorry for the delay here, Dave. Thank you for your review :)
Very intimate and tender.

The cosmic vastness and distance of stars wrapped around her loving embrace.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

10 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely review :)
There is such a sacred transcendence in this loving, the universe rising to echo each sigh. It made me feel the deep vibrations that rise between twin flame lovers. Profound, infinite magic.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

10 Months Ago

Infinite magic, I love that! Thank you so much :)
Yes, there IS magyk in the world and within ...us. And we touch it when we find ways we interact and give voice to what WE as individuals feel so that a separate someone understands. You did that here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

10 Months Ago

A million thanks for this amazing review, Chris!
such a happy feeling i had after reading this poem...great one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Your review made me happy :) Thank you for reading
Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

my pleasure....
so happy and uplifting. greatest feeling in the world in the arms of those we love.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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