A Poem by Giullia King

She takes a deep breath and sighs. "Oh darling"  
She whispers into the darkness. 
"If our souls are made out of stardust, then how come my skin feels like a desert?"  
The depths of her soul lives in poetry, 
in a in-between world with him. 
"You're the brightness of a star,  
The magic in my life." 
"You're the only secret my heart guards."  
She says as she gently puts her arms around him and blissfully drifts off into infinity. 

© 2017 Giullia King

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Nicely and elegantly done

Posted 4 Months Ago

An entire story said nine verses. This is something incredible.


Posted 5 Months Ago

Oh this is beautiful. Has a relaxed romantic feel.

Posted 6 Months Ago

Love can do that to you. A cataclysmic burst of the universe cannot contain the depth, the broad expanse of the love you wish to share with him and hope he wishes to share his with you. I like what you have to say.

Posted 6 Months Ago

Very intimate and tender.

The cosmic vastness and distance of stars wrapped around her loving embrace.

Posted 6 Months Ago

There is such a sacred transcendence in this loving, the universe rising to echo each sigh. It made me feel the deep vibrations that rise between twin flame lovers. Profound, infinite magic.

Posted 6 Months Ago

Yes, there IS magyk in the world and within And we touch it when we find ways we interact and give voice to what WE as individuals feel so that a separate someone understands. You did that here.

Posted 7 Months Ago

such a happy feeling i had after reading this poem...great one.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Giullia King

7 Months Ago

Your review made me happy :) Thank you for reading
Wajiha Nayeem

7 Months Ago

my pleasure....
so happy and uplifting. greatest feeling in the world in the arms of those we love.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Your poetry is beautiful. Intense lovers who touch each others souls. Deep feelings that surround the lovers as to blot out the world. Your words take the reader to a cosmic place. Great write.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Giullia King

2 Months Ago

Hey Richie, sorry for the delay here. I wanna thank you so much for your wonderful words. They put a.. read more

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Added on March 31, 2017
Last Updated on November 6, 2017


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Giullia King

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