Broken Pieces

Broken Pieces

A Poem by Gullia King

When I asked her: 
"What's your inspiration?" 

She answered with tears in her eyes: 
"The broken pieces of my heart."



© 2017 Gullia King



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Author's Note

Gullia King
To those of you who have asked me if I will continue writing. My answer is yes.
Because, I still have some broken pieces left.

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Everything about this piece is just so beautiful :)!
Thank you for sharing :)!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Well stated Gullia. This is palpable.

Posted 4 Months Ago


This.Is.So.Deep!
At some point I can definitely relate to it and resonate.
Keep it up

Posted 4 Months Ago


She sits with the pieces scattered before her, ponders the time it will take to ever get them placed just right...she turns her face to the sun and smiles...it doesnt really matter..for love will hold her together until she succeeds... Thank you for the inspiration Gullia King

Posted 4 Months Ago


a lovely write, we can only rise when we feel so low. sometimes the best songs and writes come from the lows

Posted 4 Months Ago


So true! Well, this is the glowing inspiration,
our mistakes make us better, no doubt.
i love the way you have structured your content!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Easier to sit in silence.
Better to try.

It seems you chose to try.

Good choice.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Brilliant.
Sometimes I wish the answer would be not the pieces of a broken heart,
but a heart full filled with happiness.

Can't wait to read more of your work :)


Posted 5 Months Ago


Glad to hear you will continue writing, Gullia. Hate to not see your poems. This is brilliant.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Gullia King

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Ted! :)
ah!!!....
wonderful and such a bright poem this is!

Posted 5 Months Ago



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Gullia King

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