Broken Pieces

Broken Pieces

A Poem by Giullia King

When I asked her: 
"What's your inspiration?" 

She answered with tears in her eyes: 
"The broken pieces of my heart."

© 2017 Giullia King

Author's Note

Giullia King
To those of you who have asked me if I will continue writing. My answer is yes.
Because, I still have some broken pieces left.

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Easier to sit in silence.
Better to try.

It seems you chose to try.

Good choice.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Sometimes I wish the answer would be not the pieces of a broken heart,
but a heart full filled with happiness.

Can't wait to read more of your work :)

Posted 8 Months Ago

Glad to hear you will continue writing, Gullia. Hate to not see your poems. This is brilliant.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Giullia King

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Ted! :)
wonderful and such a bright poem this is!

Posted 8 Months Ago

That's a beautiful answer with much needed self confidence..
I loved it..:)

Posted 8 Months Ago

This is really great. It presents the idea of preserving our own hearts through expression. In the author's note, it is good to see that you will keep writing. So it is always good to keep a few broken pieces in your pocket at least.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Two touching lines, that stirs everyone's soul. beautiful

Posted 8 Months Ago

Beautifully true, enjoyed :) x

Posted 8 Months Ago

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True. There's nothing else that can inspire you to write as much as a broken heart does. It insists upon us to pen down all our emotions and feel light-headed. Nice job!

Posted 8 Months Ago

I do understand this poem. Broken heart make the pen come alive and the truth flow to the paper. Thank you dear Gullia for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 8 Months Ago

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42 Reviews
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on May 2, 2017
Last Updated on May 2, 2017


Giullia King
Giullia King

New York, NY

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