Broken Pieces

Broken Pieces

A Poem by Giullia King

When I asked her: 
"What's your inspiration?" 

She answered with tears in her eyes: 
"The broken pieces of my heart."

© 2017 Giullia King

Author's Note

Giullia King
To those of you who have asked me if I will continue writing. My answer is yes.
Because, I still have some broken pieces left.

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So true! Well, this is the glowing inspiration,
our mistakes make us better, no doubt.
i love the way you have structured your content!

Posted 10 Months Ago

Easier to sit in silence.
Better to try.

It seems you chose to try.

Good choice.

Posted 10 Months Ago

Sometimes I wish the answer would be not the pieces of a broken heart,
but a heart full filled with happiness.

Can't wait to read more of your work :)

Posted 10 Months Ago

Glad to hear you will continue writing, Gullia. Hate to not see your poems. This is brilliant.

Posted 10 Months Ago

Giullia King

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Ted! :)
wonderful and such a bright poem this is!

Posted 10 Months Ago

That's a beautiful answer with much needed self confidence..
I loved it..:)

Posted 10 Months Ago

This is really great. It presents the idea of preserving our own hearts through expression. In the author's note, it is good to see that you will keep writing. So it is always good to keep a few broken pieces in your pocket at least.

Posted 10 Months Ago

Two touching lines, that stirs everyone's soul. beautiful

Posted 10 Months Ago

Beautifully true, enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Months Ago

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True. There's nothing else that can inspire you to write as much as a broken heart does. It insists upon us to pen down all our emotions and feel light-headed. Nice job!

Posted 10 Months Ago

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Added on May 2, 2017
Last Updated on May 2, 2017


Giullia King
Giullia King

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