Broken Pieces

Broken Pieces

A Poem by Giullia King

When I asked her: 
"What's your inspiration?" 

She answered with tears in her eyes: 
"The broken pieces of my heart."



© 2017 Giullia King



Author's Note

Giullia King
To those of you who have asked me if I will continue writing. My answer is yes.
Because, I still have some broken pieces left.

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a lovely write, we can only rise when we feel so low. sometimes the best songs and writes come from the lows

Posted 1 Year Ago


So true! Well, this is the glowing inspiration,
our mistakes make us better, no doubt.
i love the way you have structured your content!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Easier to sit in silence.
Better to try.

It seems you chose to try.

Good choice.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Brilliant.
Sometimes I wish the answer would be not the pieces of a broken heart,
but a heart full filled with happiness.

Can't wait to read more of your work :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


Glad to hear you will continue writing, Gullia. Hate to not see your poems. This is brilliant.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Ted! :)
ah!!!....
wonderful and such a bright poem this is!

Posted 1 Year Ago


That's a beautiful answer with much needed self confidence..
I loved it..:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is really great. It presents the idea of preserving our own hearts through expression. In the author's note, it is good to see that you will keep writing. So it is always good to keep a few broken pieces in your pocket at least.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Two touching lines, that stirs everyone's soul. beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautifully expressed...so true, enjoyed :) x

Posted 1 Year Ago



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