Oceans Away

Oceans Away

A Poem by Giulia King


Alone he sits, accompanied by the night sky. 
Forever devoted to a queen who's destined to always be beyond his reach. 
. . . 



© 2017 Giulia King



Author's Note

Giulia King
*Congratulations!
Your poem Oceans Away has been awarded 5 in the The magic of poetry writing contest.*

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So much pain between the words. These 2 lines carry so much weight of loaded thought. Bravo!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Giulia King

2 Months Ago

I'm happy you liked it :) thank you!
Simple and true. Nice one.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Giulia King

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

An elegantly simple take on a broken heart...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Silente! I promise I'll look into Pure Rhymes :)
Silente

1 Year Ago

Take yer time, it is not going anywhere, and you are welcome
Hard place to be. A ocean or a distance from a love one. Leave us alone and wishing. Very nice use of words and artwork. Thank you Giullia for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely words, friend :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
It hits hard to be in such a situation. Beautifully quoted.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Najam! :)
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

It was my pleasure reading this ☺
well i like it but theres not a lot of substance, its more of a statement, a singular one i mean

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your thoughts.
I love this short poem. It is how i feel bout my man. thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

I'm happy you love it, Roxane :)
Love the short and sweet nature of this as it describes unrequited love.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading, John :)
John Alexander McFadyen

1 Year Ago

My pleasure.
I didn't think so much could be said with so few words.unfortunately I can relate to this right now.thank you for sharing this

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading :)
Very truthful.

This piece can have multiple scenarios, but is most relevant to the pursuit of a love beyond one's stature. I doubt there is one person in the world who couldn't identify with these words.

Nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review!

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