Oceans Away

Alone he sits, accompanied by the night sky. 

Forever devoted to a queen who's destined to always be beyond his reach. 

. . . 

Author's Note

*Congratulations!
Your poem Oceans Away has been awarded 5 in the The magic of poetry writing contest.*

Reviews

[Suhd]

So much pain between the words. These 2 lines carry so much weight of loaded thought. Bravo!

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you liked it :) thank you!

[The Twin Arenas]

Simple and true. Nice one.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much :)

[Chase Dylan]

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

An elegantly simple take on a broken heart...

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Silente! I promise I'll look into Pure Rhymes :)

[Chase Dylan]

Take yer time, it is not going anywhere, and you are welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard place to be. A ocean or a distance from a love one. Leave us alone and wishing. Very nice use of words and artwork. Thank you Giullia for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your lovely words, friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[Najam Us Saher]

It hits hard to be in such a situation. Beautifully quoted.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much, Najam! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

It was my pleasure reading this ☺

[JackValor86]

well i like it but theres not a lot of substance, its more of a statement, a singular one i mean

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your thoughts.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I love this short poem. It is how i feel bout my man. thanks for sharing.

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you love it, Roxane :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love the short and sweet nature of this as it describes unrequited love.

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading, John :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My pleasure.

[KCthelastboyscout]

I didn't think so much could be said with so few words.unfortunately I can relate to this right now.thank you for sharing this

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for reading :)

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Very truthful.

This piece can have multiple scenarios, but is most relevant to the pursuit of a love beyond one's stature. I doubt there is one person in the world who couldn't identify with these words.

Nicely written.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for your kind review!