Oceans Away

Oceans Away

A Poem by Giullia King


Alone he sits, accompanied by the night sky. 
Forever devoted to a queen who's destined to always be beyond his reach. 
. . . 



© 2017 Giullia King



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Giullia King
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Your poem Oceans Away has been awarded 5 in the The magic of poetry writing contest.*

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Simple and true. Nice one.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
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An elegantly simple take on a broken heart...

Posted 11 Months Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Silente! I promise I'll look into Pure Rhymes :)
Silente

11 Months Ago

Take yer time, it is not going anywhere, and you are welcome
Hard place to be. A ocean or a distance from a love one. Leave us alone and wishing. Very nice use of words and artwork. Thank you Giullia for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely words, friend :)
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
It hits hard to be in such a situation. Beautifully quoted.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Najam! :)
Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

It was my pleasure reading this ☺
well i like it but theres not a lot of substance, its more of a statement, a singular one i mean

Posted 11 Months Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your thoughts.
I love this short poem. It is how i feel bout my man. thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

I'm happy you love it, Roxane :)
Love the short and sweet nature of this as it describes unrequited love.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reading, John :)
John Alexander McFadyen

11 Months Ago

My pleasure.
I didn't think so much could be said with so few words.unfortunately I can relate to this right now.thank you for sharing this

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading :)
Very truthful.

This piece can have multiple scenarios, but is most relevant to the pursuit of a love beyond one's stature. I doubt there is one person in the world who couldn't identify with these words.

Nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review!
Forever is a long time. Sad.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

It sure is, but not enough for some people.

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Added on August 28, 2017
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