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A Part Of My Soul

A Part Of My Soul

A Poem by Giullia King


 I crave love.
  The deepest, purest, rawest form of love. 
  The kind of love where it hurts.
I crave you. 

My ray of light
You are the sunlight through the windows of my room.
  You are someone I can write about endlessly, 
  never getting tired of writing about how you are my sole galaxy in this dark universe.

  My beloved one, 
  I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips 
can put poetry to shame.

I'm always soft for you, 
you brought my stone cold heart to life.
I want to kiss you lazily like we have all the time in the world 
and also urgently, like there’s no tomorrow.
I may not be able to hold you in my arms forever, 
but trust me when I say;
you’ll forever be in my words,
 in my poetry, 
in my heart,
and always, a part of my soul.



© 2017 Giullia King



Author's Note

Giullia King
Thank you for loving me the way you do. x


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I crave the love that doesn't hurt - the love that's always there - the love that will envelop us without expecting a single thing in return - the love that comes when you finally put aside your craving / wanting / need ... now that's an endless love

I like the sentiment of your poem ... best wishes for the muse X

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Giullia King

9 Months Ago

I like your little poem. Thank you for reading :)
KWP

9 Months Ago

Haha that was a comment not a poem 😃
Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Hahaha sorry but I really liked it! 😂



Reviews

"I crave love.
The deepest, purest, rawest form of love.
The kind of love where it hurts.
I crave you.

My ray of light."

Posted 3 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

Thank you for reading.
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

You are welcome...
" I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips
can put poetry to shame." beautiful poem delicately woven on love. Well written, all lines are delight for reader..

Posted 5 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

Thank you for reading :))
What a wonderful poem! It's a declaration of love, laced with gratitude, expressed with truth and creativity. The voice is consistent and honest.
'My beloved one, I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips
can put poetry to shame.'

Whoever is the recipient of such declaration of love is indeed a lucky man.

WELL DONE

Posted 5 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

Thank you for this amazing review! It put a big smile on my face :) xx
BlakPrince

3 Months Ago

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Giullia,
A deep tone to reach the depths of emotion for a lover. Your poem portrays a commitment that is spiritual and cannot be broken. We all yearn for this strength in a love relationship and if you are fortunate to have been there, you always carry a piece of it in your heart.
Blessings,
Richie b.





Posted 6 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

You're absolutely right, Richie. Blessings to you as well, my friend.
Wow, it's so romantic. Falling in love with someone is the best part in our life. Very well written.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

It really is :) Thank you :)
Beautiful. I enjoyed the peaceful inward drawing. Thank you!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

And thank you! :)
that was extremely romantic ;) I could see everything in my head :) amazing job :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

I'm happy you could visualize it :) Thank you so much for reading!
Oh my gosh. Just wow so romantic

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much! :)
sounds like true love to me,loved it

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Makes me happy that you loved it, Mr Wordman :)
 wordman

9 Months Ago

if you`re happy,then i`m happy
This is a fine write, Giullia, which smacks of credibility. It has many rich lines and describes so many facets or shapes love may take. To feel them all for one person is a joyous thing to be treasured.

As is my wont may I offer two comments, but don't be in any doubt about how good I think this is and how much I enjoyed reading it and getting inside it. The two thoughts are
(1) The very first line sounds a bit desperate as though you happened upon someone who ticked all the boxes on an ache you already had. Personally I'd change it to finish with 'you' like the 4th line
(2) You brought my stone cold heart to life .... a fabulous line, but it contains the only past tense verb in the whole poem. It's clear why - they 'awoke' you and since then you've been on a different plane. So I get it. All I can say is, if it had been me, I would have been searching for a way to get the same notion across using the present tense - for me, it jarred ever so slightly.

I don't like the way my 'negative' comments take more space. I really like this poem and, frankly, I'm envious!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

I welcome your reviews, Nigel, always. I find it interesting to see how my poems affect you and I al.. read more

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