Too Much

Too Much

A Poem by GwenLark
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Everyone will feel this at one point

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This is too much.
This is too much.

I can't do this anymore.
The world is cruel,
The world is sharp.

It takes my breath away.

This is too much.

© 2017 GwenLark



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Not alot to comment on. This world puts alot on our shoulders, what always helps me is some mixed chinese japanese loose leaf green tea, or some loose leaf rooibos chai tea (minty). I also burn a rather expensive candle for about 2 hours to persuade me to sleep. I recommend some warm tea to anyone needing to take an edge off, plus they smell great.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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I know I agree I am with
I feel ya

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hard to breathe when you feel like you're drowning..but the waves will bring you to shore.catch your breath.rise up.figure out what direction to go.take a step forward...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not alot to comment on. This world puts alot on our shoulders, what always helps me is some mixed chinese japanese loose leaf green tea, or some loose leaf rooibos chai tea (minty). I also burn a rather expensive candle for about 2 hours to persuade me to sleep. I recommend some warm tea to anyone needing to take an edge off, plus they smell great.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 18, 2017
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Tags: Too much, poem, depression, love, short

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GwenLark
GwenLark

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom



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