Hourglass of Confusion

Pondering life

I have never been more confused about life
than I am this very time in my life
I am born to life
live through life
just to realize
that my life
is not
about
life
at
all
At
least
not in
this reality
is life about life
it's more about afterlife
and what afterlife will be like
in the afterlife of our life in our life
I am more confused about life and afterlife

Reviews

[thewholesoul]

nice visual to begin with. i love the depth of your poetry and thoughts. "so i in this life of honey dipped strife do all which i must but smile when i can". we are spiritual creatures and our consciousness survives death. but we are here now i believe to make ourselves, everyone we know and the world at large a better in some way. eternal health, happiness and prosperity!

[FateDictates]

very clever and cool..nice work..

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Thank you Fate. :)