She Takes Your Love

She Takes Your Love

A Poem by Gypsy Dreamer
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Song about long distant lovers

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I know we belong together
obligations keep us apart.

No one wants to weather
storms of fractured hearts.

Peace be with you brother
as you seal away your love...

into a  f a r  a w a y  turtle dove...
she flies above...
she takes your love.

Sit still long distant lover
loneliness... it hides...

behind the smiles and laughter
way down deep inside.

Peace be with you brother
as you seal away your pride...

into a  f a r  a w a y  turtle dove...
she flies above...
she takes your love.

Peace be with you brother
as you seal away your love...

Peace with you brother 
as you seal away your love...

Peace with you brother
as you seal away your love...

into a  f a r  a w a y  turtle dove...
she flies above...
she takes your love.

She takes your love.






© 2017 Gypsy Dreamer



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This sounds so much like a song for one who had their heart broken and then they are trying to find peace again.. Thank you for sharing


Posted 8 Months Ago


Gypsy Dreamer

7 Months Ago

Thank you, my heart, like many others, has suffered loss of loved ones and not to see or hold them i.. read more
I loved the spacing in your fourth stanza, it sets out the feelings. Very well written, emotional read

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gypsy Dreamer

10 Months Ago

Thank you, I liked that stanza also.

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Added on December 27, 2017
Last Updated on December 27, 2017
Tags: Hearts, storms, turtle dove, love, lover, smiles, laughter, peace, brother, obligations