Living Forever

Living Forever

A Poem by Gypsy Dreamer
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As I walk through the valley of the shadows of death, I will fight with the spirit of his name.

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They tell me that I can live forever
I think forever is a long time
never ever ending existence
Do we need to sub-line?

We smile when we think of heaven
disturbed at the thought of hell
yet when I think of forever
I can't breathe, I turn pale.

Our universe is rotating
a constant work of motion
seem to be lost in a loop
a regenerating potion.

How many times do you think...
we have actually been here,
perfecting our human ways
then destroying out of fear?

I wish to exist with God
if I grow tired he may help me.
I wish to help all others
to accept his love so freely.









© 2010 Gypsy Dreamer


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To live forever. I don't know. If we could keep our youth and strength it would be very good. Repetition seem to happen often in the life. Like we are mice on a wheel. I believe only peace we can find in a life is by being kind and holding on to love with both arms. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


well crafted and really allowing us to think.....a little philosophical too!! congrats

vincent
www.esprit.aegauthorblogs.com
www.esprit.stblogs.com

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the idea of repeating where we've been because the earth takes us back in its rotation. Very unique. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 14, 2010
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