Those Two Words

Those two awfully terrible yet relieving words that

either relieve you or completely crush your heart

 

 

JUST FRIENDS

Author's Note

Just something random that's been on my mind

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

It was short, but I liked it. I liked it because those 3 lines packed a punch . Great job

[Dreamer]

I like the font of the words Just Friends. It adds a punch to your poem especially if the reader would personally feel crushed by those words. The fact that you poem is basically two lines sort of represents how these two words could so simply, easily and quickly destroy someone. Hearing those words (especially the 'just' part because it suggests that someone thought it was more and the other person had to set it straight- we're "Just Friends") could be the hardest thing. What I would suggest is that u change the color to something more bold (thats just me though). May be u have it this color for a reason. anyway good write:) There's a competition for poems with only two lines, you should enter this if u want to.

[realmwriter]

Bravo! Words I have heard before and for me where crushing! None the less perfecly conveyed!

[Ashli The Amazing]

yeah those two words i don't like very much

[Sothe (White Princess)]

This says so much in such little words......A true piece at most. These two little words can decide everything just like the words "I love you". These words can either break you.....or make you feel everlasting happiness. (depending on the situation of course ;D) Well Done.

[Coffee Vampier]

That is a terrible thing to hear....
if its so terrible to hear....
would it be just as terrible to say?

[Star Wolf]

Wow, so true. And reading this brought to me how powerful those two words really really are. What an impact!! You're whole poem packs quite a punch.

[Honourfish]

Heartbreakingly true! Such a simple poem, but has so much power! great job.

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This is so true, well stataed fact!

[Poe Redd]

So, so terribly true, my dearest friend. I never heard it put like that, and you did it. I'm like, "Wow. Never thought of that." I really like this.