SHE!:)

SHE!:)

A Poem by Yina
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That's her!:)

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'She' is the amazing friend

'She' is the wonderful listening ear

'She' is the one with the awesome hugs

'She' saw me through my worst

'She' is my amazing wonderful beautiful sister!:)

 

I love you, Eva!!:):)

© 2011 Yina


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Yina
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She is wonderful, amazing and true
She would give the whole world to you
She is the light in my darkest day, the fire on the coldest night
She who's beauty and innermost piety
Is my sister, friend and cinfidant.................Loved your poem to your sister :O)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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What a lovely tribute to your sister.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awe! That is so sweet! Love It genuine and honest, Very Nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice write. i really liked it, i could tell you really love your sister (wish i had one like that).

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like this it reminds me of my sisters... i have 2 sisters and they are my best friends... and some of my friends are like sisters... i don't know what i would do without them...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm not sure if this girl is your sister or just a friend that seems like a sister, but if it's the latter then I too have a friend like that. Unfortunately, few things inspire me to write poetry but that friend that I have is one of those rare things; so I understand how important that person can be. Anyway, this was a very nice poem that I can relate to. Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


that is very nice and so true for my best friend
i wrote one for my bff ..
nice work


Posted 12 Years Ago


:P loved it! short sweet got your point across with a catchy rhyme and beat :P very uplifting you must have a close relationship with your sister :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw, this is so sweet and cute! Many siblings fight with each other, but here you show that she is a gift-- not a curse. I have five siblings, and I love them all! And I'm sure your sister loves this, and will treasure it always. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


How touching! You must really care for your sister to write such a touching piece! Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is great. It shows how important a sister really can be and that is awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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