That Wonderful Place

For a contest to descibe where I'd like to go

A place where I'll never cry again

a place of no more pain or gain

a place of no more death

a place of no more heart breaks

a place of no more arguments

a place of no more fights

a place of no more rights

a place of no more wars

a place of only peace

 

In this wonderful place we'll have only joy

there we'll have only happiness

only peaceful smiles

no frowns or tears

there will be never-ending singing

never-ending laughter

never-ending hugs

 

Oh to call this glorious place home

this wonderful place where Jesus resides

 

I wanna go to Heaven

Author's Note

I took out the gas prices line since there's several poeple that told me it's a mockery to Heaven

Reviews

[Dreamer]

I wanna go too:) Please you have no idea:) This is amazing, simple words that are so strong. I'm glad i came across this piece. Im going to msg u right nw k

[~Lizzy♬]

I love this poem. :) It's a beautiful description of the world God has made us go to when our lives are done here. The beauty of God's world is in our imagination because we never can be sure what it really looks like until we are ready to go there. God is the one who knows when our lives are ready to end and enter his kingdom. Wonderful write because it's a beautiful poem about God's kingdom. He loves you forever and don't forget that. Great write. :)

~Lizzard~

[November Gold]

This is nicely done first of all :) Kudos to you!

Someone else stated below that the hardships make life more interesting, and I have to agree with her; sometimes they really do and they for sure make us stronger people. Embrace your journey young Lady, use every bit of it to shape your Self and grow. Keep writing too, you do it well :)

[akapr17other]

For some reason I think that the hardships life brings make it more interesting. I guess that shows how easy my life has been thus far, but I feel like heaven would be such a boring place if it were all smiles. Anyway, it's a nice, joyful poem. Well done.

[ImagineItAll]

I think everyone wishes for a place like this before they die, but they never find it. Beautiful poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful description of heaven. Maybe we'll all be in a poetry group there!

[Karli]

Beautiful, truthful, lovely, soft, well-written, and any other compliment you can think of! It was an easy, gentle description of our destiny, Heaven. It's truly a beautiful thing, and I'm glad you wrote about it. :)

[Kelly M.]

This is so beautiful and true because Heaven is going to be perfect, and beyond our wildest dreams. You helped us get a glimpse of God's promise in this poem. Beautiful. :)

[Kyla H]

Describes such a beautiful utopia, if only I could go there sooner, haha.

[DontBlink158]

that sounds like a great place if only if only i could go there :) great write