Frozen Waterfall

Waterfall so beautiful ,so tall

coming down a mountain side

licking the earth as you tumble down

feelings released,some joy and pleasure

leave you empty light as a feather

frozen waterfall,how will you thaw?

by touching the place that means the most

the water has stopped, it is locked inside

the tears you send down are easily wiped away

come back to us, come over the mountain

climb it,hurry down,rush your waters

you have it all smells that entice,

hearing bliss,eyes fill with joy,touching power,

you have it all, remember that you have our need

the place that means the most is right here

words onto paper thaw the waterfall

words in the heart thaw the waterfall

words shared with others in need

thawed ,running down,coming alive

frozen waterfall is free

Reviews

[zainul]

Wonderful idea transformed as a unique piece.
I imagine a fall being thawed and enjoy the beauty that follows with it.
Love the line: "frozen waterfall is free"

[Larry Dyson]

such deeply descriptive words and inner feelings..glad you could thaw today...Laury

[Jack...]

So very beautiful my friend. This is now one of my favorites by you. Simply stunning.

[Jeremy V Chiew]

I enjoyed this piece. Thank you for writing it.

[Quattro Hall]

I don't think there is a word on the human written language that can tell you how much I liked this. wonderment is as close as I get. greatness in an all

[Walani Ndhlovu]

Wow! a very beautiful poem i don't remeber if I have read one like this before.

[Holly Mason]

thank you for taking time to read and review
different write....but the same page hahah

[catofjade]

You have used the cleansing and "absolution"-like properties of water very well here, and it has a strange but very attractive quality of both drawing one in yet presenting a bird's eye view at the same time, well done!!

[Holly Mason]

thank you much again

[Walani Ndhlovu]

I really like your writing style and I, as a young writer, am inpired by this style. I looking forward to read more of your poems. Have a look at mine and tell me how I can improve please.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i see allegory here..yes, the waterfall, the frozen water thawing...but i also see the tears of pain from a failed relationship...losing someone, freezing up..the emotions frozen in place, and then a spring happens...someone comes along who gets the water running again.

[Holly Mason]

thank you much jacob I love when you read

[Chris]

When comes the spring
- inside -
thawed thoughts will flow
and land beside the smile
held so tight within
and renew the water's fall
all over again...

[Holly Mason]

thank you chris for reading beautiful reveiw

[Chris]

you ever have a tear freeze?

[Holly Mason]

not one that I couldn't thaw quickly...reasoning is warmer then over thinking