Bad Valentine

I have a secret , sshshshs don't tell.

For I am a bad valentine going straight to hell.

My neighbors husband has been eyeing me

and I do not mind ,for I like what I see.

She is going to work. Will he sneak over?

ahh dang guess not, looks like he drove her.

The car is back ,a flirty glance sent.

Coming in the backdoor singing as he went.

Our hair is tousled ,clothes are on the floor.

When will my big strong man be back for more?

Waiting the next day and into the next,

did he forget me or just over sexed?

Staring out the window I see my attraction.

I stand up naked to gauge his reaction.

No glance, no look does he send my way.

He heads down the street different girls house today.

I will not get upset! I am sure this I deserve.

But damn I want him and this throws a curve.

Wanting to be near, I befriend his wife.

Now hitting a nerve I mess with his life.

Bad valentine, you should of kept it between us.

I told her everything, your s**t is packed ,hit the bus.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, an appropriate poem for Valentine's Day coming up...especially since this Valentine is kind of like Fatal Attraction....Funny...you wrote this on my first ex-wife's birthday...
well done.
j.

[Frieda P]

Who knew you were such a badass Holly...ha, nice to see you back!

[Holly Mason]

yup sometimes I can wear big girl pants! hahhaha nice to see you fine lady hope you enjoyed a laugh!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You naughty girl, why can't you live next to me.

[Holly Mason]

hahahhaha *) nice sayin hi

[Eagle Cruagh]

Bad Valentine.
I have read most of your stuff now.
Will you be happy. Will a big guy with
a lot of big attributes, great dedication, commitments
galore------ is that the answer. I have not read the thing
you really like---- tell me about that ------ thing.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[The Nude Writer]

WOW! This is an amazing story you have told :)
And from a great point of view.
Way to get revenge ;)

[T.B. Odin]

Catchy title, interesting write, with nice rhythm. I like the composition. Lust, desire, action, betrayal, revenge, enlightenment. I found it entertaining, reflective and touching. It has a nice step with a distinct direction. The words produce incredible imagery, well done. Thanks for sharing.

[Holly Mason]

this was just fun to write
got to have fun sometimes even with words only
thank you for reading

[quinfinn]

ah yes, that forbidden fruit always rots too quickly, sometimes when it is still on the vine. this is an excellent write with a powerful life lesson. nicely done. i love the last two lines...

[Holly Mason]

thank you so much for taking time to read and enjoy
laughed the whole time*)

[Vavidi]

I loved it, very clever & what a great story it tells, nice work Holly :)

[Stan]

I would tell you that this was humorous, clever, and tragic at the same time, but I would feel guilty for doing so.

[BeautifulPoison]

I absolutely love this poem. I wrote a piece similar to this. I'll have to post it one day !!

[Holly Mason]

how about today!!fun writes thank you for enjoying