Why am I hungover?

Why am I hungover?

A Poem by Holly Mason

a porch
a rocker
and the
setting 
of the
sun
reaching 
for a 
falling star
fell off
of the rocker
onto
the porch
and the rising
of the
sun

© 2013 Holly Mason


Author's Note

Holly Mason
that's why...*)
Sunday fun

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Amazing how the world seems to revolve at a different speed after a drink or five, throwing you of kilter, isn`t it Holly? A dizzy piece! P.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'm not proud of it, but I did that once. In my case, no rocking chair was needed--just gravity.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

gravity an adult drinks best friend...obviously it was comic relief night
thank you for readin.. read more
That made me smile! A fun read, and yet some thought provoking ideas under this unique structure... Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

I think a porch and a rocker are calling out names...you are on the list*)
thank you so much f.. read more
Sunday fun is often the best fun, the day you have time to see more clearly but then, maybe not in this case! Love the way your words drip down the page .. clever, graphic piece of writing. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you very much for your kind comments....I love Sundays even if hungover*)
thank you so m.. read more
This made me laugh. Very humorously written. I like it! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

well sometimes a laugh is good especially when hungover*)thank you much for reading
Best hangover ever.. beautifully penned..xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

fun to write*)and thank you much for reading
I think you are drunk on nature, and that is one of the best highs, next to being drunk on love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

I am high on life...have a good Monday
Had to smile to myself when I read this. The way you structured the poem guides the reader along with the speaker. All the way to the floor of that porch. Truly enjoyed this, Holly

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

well thank you much kind sir truly
this was fun...i like how the poem came back around within itself.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

well thank you sir really appreciate your comments always

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Holly Mason

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