They all fall down...

They all fall down...

A Poem by Rhan F. Sydney
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Just wrote it...It popped into my head..

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Heaven was a wonder

And I, myself

The spawn of all that is asunder

 

A sinner

Unclean

Crushed beneath

The ashes

The Obscene

 

Because God lost faith in me

And Allah did to

Buddha and Jesus

The gentile jew

 

I'll die a lonely sinner

With a cross on my back

And condemned for forever

By all things I lack

 

Can't pray for forgiveness

Can't wish on a star

I'd wish for deliverance

For hope, not more

 

I smile and plead

And beg you to see

This one lonely sinner

Only is me.

© 2008 Rhan F. Sydney


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As always you have such a way with words. Keep the words flowing. =) I miss you.

-Erica

Posted 14 Years Ago


God never loses faith. He loves you and is forgiving.

Good write. Thanks for entering my contest!
-Alaska

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by Rhan F. Sydney