White Snow Sadness

White Snow Sadness

A Poem by Hamkar
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White snow sadness...

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White Snow Sadness

 

I often sense white

Its purity given to the world

And what it represents

And through my eyes

Snow should be sadness

The uncertainty of it

Ever falling

Upon the world

And how it purifies

The mind

Cleanses senses

And at the end

It melts away

Down deep

Somewhere

Where occasionally

 It will reappear

As white snow sadness

Flowing from the soul

© 2010 Hamkar


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hmm snow as a sad metaphor..new to my ears and wonder how it would be portrayed in visual context...I know it always was sad when it melted and got dirty grey in the city...but it is rain and we need that so badly now...nice piece though ..made me feel the sadness .

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Hamkar
Hamkar

Nelson, New Zealand



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