Words for poison

Words for poison

A Poem by Hana Linzi
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this is a poem i wrote in school about someone that really meant something to me. Hope you enjoy it :)

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You come around, 
Not that often,
For not that long
Always have something Better to do,
Someone better to be with
Never the one, 
I’m never the one
I’m the only one who really cares
You’re a broom 
Sweeping me away 
Every chance you get
I’m no good in those black holes eyes
Not seeing anything in front of you

You’re a monster!
Big red eyes
Comes out when 
No one sees you
Devouring souls
Putting fears in eyes.
Making children not sleep at night

You are a villain 
Once you have the power, 
Holding them in your hands
Gripping with all your might
Not letting them see pass the tint 
They never knew what you had
Never knew your plans or desires
You were never the same since then. 
Feeding on victims you once adored 
You were the man everyone looked upon 
Devoured all the looks, and love you shown
I see the true side of you
You held your hand out
I was unknowing of the true you

You’re the devil
Hiding the red tint of your face
The long pointed tail
That you stab people in the back
The blood and trust flowing out
The moans and cries at night 
The words you spoke are poison
We believed it though
Now taking the wrath of what we once consumed
I devoured the love you shown

But love is like a mirror 
You can’t always fix something broken without breaking yourself.
I know how it goes,  
I broke myself trying to piece 
The ridges back together 
The cuts and blood pours out
In pain and agony, 
I try piecing them back together, 
One on top of another, 
Trying to pit that one piece in, 
Oblivious of it not compatible
Shards of glass all around me, 
My hands are weakened due 
The sharp pieces of glass
Lodged in my palm,
The blood slowly oozing out
 around the glass. 
Ignoring the pain in my hands,
One by one
I try piecing the unfixable mirror back.


Love takes time 
Time is a ticking time bomb 
Sooner or later
I’ll take the pain off my back.
I walked away and let it all shatter to a thousand pieces.

© 2014 Hana Linzi


Author's Note

Hana Linzi
what do you think I should fix? Any grammer errors? tell me your real opinion. your likes n dislikes! thank you!

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Wow, I can really relate to this! This evil person you've described sounds just like my Ex haha! You have a lot of memorable lines in here such as:
"You’re a broom
Sweeping me away
Every chance you get"

and

"But love is like a mirror
You can’t always fix something broken without breaking yourself."

Quick question: is there a "to" missing in this line?
"My hands are weakened due
The sharp pieces of glass"

Thank you very much for sharing, it was a pleasure to read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hana Linzi

9 Years Ago

Thank you for pointing that one out to me! This one has to relate to a few. one being an ex the othe.. read more

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Added on July 3, 2014
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Tags: relationships, life, lettinggo, evil, bad person, teenage lives, parents, family, friends, love