Brutal love

Brutal love

A Poem by Hana Saemon
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Of someone who was in an abusive relationship

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Brutal love

Ruthless

Blood, Pain

Broken faces

 

Torn lips

Lies

The fear in my eyes

Afraid to break ties

 

That look you had on you

Cry was all I could do

As I lie there

Hiding under my hair

 

You said sorry

Over and over as you hugged me

I flinched in pain

Trying not to faint

 

I trusted

I thought I mattered

I thought you loved

Truth is, you didn’t

 

Six years later

The story of you and me is over

But your shadows still tower

In my sleep, I still cower…

© 2013 Hana Saemon


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its no doubt i have fallen in love with your writing.Bitter but sweet words.Great penning

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hana Saemon

10 Years Ago

Thank you once again! It's really great that you enjoy my writings. :)
Nkosana B Masuku

10 Years Ago

I truly do and looking forward for more.
Brave little piece, here. My mom was abused for a lot of years. She was filled with shame, you could see it in her eyes. This piece brought tears to my eyes along with a picture of my mom, hair hiding her face. Angi~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hana Saemon

10 Years Ago

I'm sorry about your mom. I hope those who have been abused or are still being abused will find ways.. read more
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Can I please smack this persons face? The muse for this write?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hana Saemon

10 Years Ago

by all means. you have my blessings. haha

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Hana Saemon
Hana Saemon

New Zealand



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Just a student. Writing is something i do when i need to let out feelings. Inspirations are usually from life events. more..

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