ARROW OF PAIN

Oh arrow of pain
I ran from you
I ran but could not
Run no more

You chased me
Just like you are
Been blown by the
The wind

Oh arrow of pain
Now you got me
Right in the heart

But why?
Why have you decided
To keep yourself in
My heart for so long?

Why cant you be avoided?

Author's Note

Your corrections will creat a ladder to my improvement.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Beautiful poem that everyone can relate to. Done to perfection.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Haneefah, you write as beautiful as your name .
i think the font and structure blend perfectly.
this is a thoughtful write. Everyone comes across this 'arrow' which is painful.
Keep writing!

[Haneefah]

Thanks Tazeen.
Your words are enthralling.

[victor adeniran]

wonderful piece dear,i will surely say this is genius