Open Your Eyes

Open Your Eyes

A Poem by Hannah

Why don't you open your eyes,
And notice the absentee?

Those deep beautiful eyes;
Why don't they see me?

What else can I do
to get back the chance I blew?

This beating in my chest,
yearning for you and your best.

This endless sleepless night,
reliving that final fight.

I hope to see you around the bend,
but I may be chasing till the end.

© 2017 Hannah



Author's Note

Hannah
I appreciate constructive criticism and comments!

*reuploaded from my old account: http://www.writerscafe.org/HannahTaylor

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This poem flowed nicely. You seem to have emotional poems down.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

3 Months Ago

I appreciate you saying so. Thank you for reading.
Nice rhyming and flowing it make really nice sound when I read it. Also very moving story in between words. I really like it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
Post Mortem

5 Months Ago

You welcome nicely done.
that was really great, it tell a romantic story, it is set up really great, amazing job Hannah :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Justin! Glad you enjoyed reading.
Justin

7 Months Ago

your welcome, I do enjoy reading your material :)

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