Looking for Affection

Looking for Affection

A Poem by Hannah

Long blonde hair, fair skin, big gray eyes.
Longing for your attention, but you don't notice.
I want to tell you, but maybe that is unwise.
Would it even matter? Would your response be like ice?

Do I have any hope? Are you like me?
Never knowing if your looks mean anything.
Do you want me to try? Or should I let you be?
You could have anyone, and I have nothing to bring.

© 2017 Hannah

Author's Note

*reuploaded from my old account: http://www.writerscafe.org/HannahTaylor

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we come as we are,we are all beauty to the right person

Posted 2 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


2 Months Ago

Very wise words, wordman. Thanks for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts.

2 Months Ago

just thoughts,our beauty lies in the soul,outer beauty is just skin deep,whats inside of us is who w.. read more
I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

(sometimes we all have this want and feeling.....)

Posted 3 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


3 Months Ago

Thank you very much, emipoemi. Yes, this is a very universal emotion, for better or for worse.

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